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A类写作提纲(所有题目均根据考生回忆翻译而成,不排除真实考试不一样的情况出现) 制作匆忙,难免有错误,请指正

1、  People are more and more worried about employment of young adult. In many countries, after young people graduated, they still have little chance to find a job. What do you think are the reasons for this from individual and social angle? What solutions would you suggest?

分析:本题属于problems+reasons+recommendations型
这道题目无非只是“青少年问题”+“失业问题”的混合罢了

Beginning:介绍背景给出问题
When we read newspapers, our attention is always attracted by increasing
unemployment rate in young adult. …… In my opinion, there are many causes for this disquieting(causing anxiety) phenomenon and we should try to solve the problem. Body: causes
Most companies would rather employ a low-educational specialized worker than a this year's graduate from a well-known university

There is little chance of find a job because of an unmandatory retirement age

The current education system brings on a lot of bookworms(someone who likes reading very much)Whole societies’ recession

Age discrimination(the practice of treating one person or group differently from another in an unfair way) occurs when a decision is made on the basis of a person’s age. In the workplace these are most often decisions about recruitment(to find new people to work in a company, join an organization, do a job etc来自, promotion and dismissal(when someone is removed from their job). Although such discrimination could be seen in reluctance to hire workers who were perceived to be too young and immature for the job, in practice it refers to a bias against older workers.
End: solutions
Schools should provide more practice opportunities to students for helping their rapid development.

The city hall should limit retirement age

The companies should give young adult more opportunities to grow for the companies’ future, especially these potential young people

The government should find some methods for economic recovery

It's necessary to eliminate all forms of age discrimination

2、Animal experiments are not cruel. Agree or disagree?
分析:依旧是老题的变形,但突出了cruel,所以不要写错

Beginning:
Many years – conservationists and animal rights groups- arguing that –animal experiments are not cruel – I agree/disagree – following reasons:
Body:
Reason1---agree:
topic sentence: Animal experiments are justified to relieve human suffering论述:the reduction of human suffering is our first priority and the prevention of animal suffering or death is secondary to that (although still important). So that if there is a decent(following moral standards that are acceptable to society) chance that an experiment will result in an important medical breakthrough that will reduce human suffering and death then it is justifiable to allow animal suffering. Animal experimentation is the (sometimes distasteful(unpleasant or morally offensive)) means to much greater ends.
Digress:
topic sentence: Animal experiments are cruel because of the animals’ suffering
Animals have the right to be treated as beings of value in themselves, not as the means to human ends; To infect monkeys with the AIDS virus or to expose rodents(啮齿动物) to toxic chemicals and radiation([辐射) is simply not acceptable, whatever the supposed benefits.
Reason2—agree
topic sentence: to prevent animal suffering, in practice it is possible (and absolutely right) to keep animal suffering to an absolute minimum.
Animal experimenters should aspire to the highest levels of animal welfare in their laboratories, using anaesthetics(麻醉学) wherever possible and keeping animals in clean, comfortable, and healthy conditions. In short(=to sum up/to summarize/in summary), it is possible to experiment on animals without being cruel to animals.

disagree:
topic sentence: In practice, as everyone knows, animals are not routinely(if something is routinely done, it is done as a normal part of a process or job例行公事地) treated well by animal experimenters.
Apart from the fact that millions of animals die each year in experiments, others are often not adequately anaesthetised and are abused by handlers and experimenters. It is idealistic to suppose that this will ever stop as long as society endorses vivisection(the practice doing medical or scientific tests on live animals活体解剖).
End:
Many people think –animal experiments = cruel, barbaric – I do (not) agree …… 
 
 


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